Wicked Wednesday Mixed Bag Review - Dance Alone

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Hi there it's MISCHIEF_MAKER1 here with this week's
Wicked Wednesday One Shot

This week I stumbled upon
one of the   Twilight in the roaring Twenties. entries..

Let's start off with the official summary
  Jasper is mourning his lost love when he stumbles upon a woman dancing alone on a crowded dance floor, and is intrigued. He struggles to help her the only way he knows how, and hopes to help himself. Not a JxB love story. One-Shot. Roaring 20s Contest.

So let's get to it!

First, let me seriously apologize for not getting this done yesterday...I am epic fail. This week has been a total bust. But enough about me! Let's seriously delve into this fic!

Well, when I went looking for something in the "Roaring Twenties" oneshots...I was disapointed. There was ALL Bella/Edward fics! Now, not that I don't love me some B/E goodness, but I was craving something different, something...MORE. And buddyroo, I found it.

As the summery says, this is NOT a love story. Well, it is, just not like you'd think. See, Jasper's a vampire. And, well, let's you just take a peek into his mind:



Jasper felt the venom drip from his teeth as her tongue flicked out over his lips, licking up drops of liquor that may have spilled. His body tensed for a moment, the urge to consume heavy on him, but he fought it back, and he swallowed his venom, then tilted his head and opened his lips wide enough to cover hers and sucked her tongue into his own mouth. His cold tongue rolled over hers and her arousal let loose in the air, encouraging his own.


Ungh. Yeah. This is a fairly new writer and she has gotten NO LOVE for this story! RUN to read it! It's heartbreaking even as it's HAWT with lemony goodness! I seriously don't want to give it away. It's SUH good!!


But, I'll be nice. I'll leave you with another little tease...
He watched his hand ascend under her dress, until he could longer see it, but he stared as though he could wear a hole right through the fabric. Isabel shuddered and he looked up at her face, seeing a tear drip from one eye, and hating himself a little more in that moment. His hand didn’t care, however, and didn’t stop until it hit a damp fortress. He stroked back and forth over her panties and soon she had them soaked through. Jasper withdrew his hand quickly and licked down his fingers, the taste faint but enough. Isabel gasped and watched him, thinking he seemed animalistic all of a sudden, which contradicted his easy, gentlemanly demeanor. She didn’t know whether to fear or give in, part of her wanting to not soil her body with his hands, and the other part of her wanting to be taken, ripped into, satisfied yet numb.

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