Missmatched Mondays - Chocolate

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Hiya Kittens! the Boo/Miztrezboo here with the next in our non canon/un canon exploration.... I LOVE a well told story, I love reading something that is different from the fifty million (or thereabouts) fanfic I've read in the past, thirteen months of being completely INVOLVED with fanfiction. So, when AngstGoddess003 and PastichePen organized the Slash/Backslash contest BEGGING for interesting and different slash to add to the fandom.. it SCREAMED JACKPOT to me! SO here's one that I adored...

Status: Complete
Realm: AH
Chapters Completed: OneShot
Opposites Attract: Jasper/Edward
Why this fic should be pimped: From the moment they met, it was like love at first sight. The way that FarDaerisMai2 has wound her way from the first meeting right through their relationship, ups and downs in a one shot is amazing. It truly is like reading a multichap, with layers and moments that will have you smiling, heart aching, quivering with need and sobbing like a baby.. I really can't explain properly how amazing this story is, and I can't say too much because the ending.. the whole fic.. it would give too much away. So a short snippet to gain your interest then I beg, NAY PLEAD with you to go and read and review. It's really just THAT good.. have I ever steered you wrong?


“Come here, beautiful,” he said, and pushed me back and up onto the table, pressing against my chest until I lay down flat. He climbed up after me and straddled my waist. “Now it’s my turn to play,” he said. He grabbed a nearby pastry bag, filled it with the buttercream still sitting in the bowl, and began to pipe it over my chest. I couldn’t see what the designs were, but I could feel the swirling, light touches of the frosting, as intimate as any lover’s caress. I watched his face as he worked, and he was so stunning, he looked almost ethereal. Once or twice, however, he stuck his tongue between his lips as he concentrated on something in particular, making him look younger, more innocent, than he was. He moved down my body, circling my belly button, before decorating my hips, and then starting to work on my straining cock. If I thought the feel of the buttercream against my chest was intimate, the sensation of it being piped along my dick was indescribable. My hips bucked of their own volition, my body desperately seeking some sort of relief from the delicious torture Edward was inflicting on me.

He sat back on his heels between my legs and murmured, “Fucking hot.” He jumped down and said, “Hold on!” He returned a moment later with a Polaroid camera in his hand. “Please? I won’t take one of your face, but I want you to see this.” I nodded silently, and he snapped two pictures before setting the camera and developing pictures down, and then climbing back up on the table. “You are so fucking gorgeous, Jasper. But now? Now, I’m going to eat you.” And he proceeded to do just that.


I implore you to read more.. Starfish422 and SubtlePen also have amazing entries that will leave you completely moved and wondering how you ever lived without having slash in your life.. even I threw an entry into the ring.. and that's more than I'd EVER thought I'd do.

GO READ LOVE

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Anonymous said...

this is such a good story (tissue warning)