Faithful Fridays - Fellatiator One Shot Review
A little something NEW from your Fellatiators. We'll be reccing our usual canon shizzle for Fridays but with a twist. One shots only, hot shots even one could say... But, that remains to be seen as our Fellatiators give this weeks opinions on...
Official Summary - Oneshot for the Love Through Lemons Contest. Edward's been working late nights at the office. Bella plans a surprise to help them spark up their sex life. What will Edward find when he comes home? AU/AH OOC
Bemylullaby: 4/5
“Oh, and Edward?” she said as she slipped her hand into my pants, “Don’t you dare cum until I give you permission,”
*grins* Yeah, that was all sorts of yumminess. Really anything that involves strawberries and you've got me hooked! :DMiztrezboo : -4/5
Ice and chocolate covered strawberries and sex OH MY! One of the most amazing one shot's I've read. Sexy Bella in charge for a change and leading Edward to breaking point. But what a trip to get there *sigh.. going to find some strawberries and cream RIGHT NOW*
Mischief-Maker1: -3/5
Oh...love it when we play with our food! VERY good lemon, very entertaining. *grins* I love slightly out of control Edward and dominating Bella. HAWT! Only issue? I hate the word 'prick' unless you're CALLING someone a prick. It's a little thing, I realize. This was very well written! Very enjoyable!
Nostalgicmiss: - 4/5
I love that they are just a normal couple having fun in their relationship. But there's something about bringing food into the equation that's undeniably hot. Especially when one half of the couple is blindfolded. Seeing Bella's playful side was also fun in this. The whole thing was hot!
TwilightMom: - 3.5/5
This was one of our most faithful reviewers very first attempt at fanfic and I was so happy she alerted me so I could read it. There is just something sooooo sexy about sex and food. Not only do we have a 'lemom' but strawberries and whipped cream as well. All I can say is kudos for such a great one shot and that as soon as I was done I headed out to the nearest grocery store for SUPPLIES..
ImWithTheVampires08: - 4/5
Wow...for this being her first lemon, I think she did an excellent job. The story flowed well, and I love the fact that Edward and Bella are already together. Any time you pair food with "lemons" is a good deal for me! Great job.
So all in all a resounding Sexy Banana's..
Stay tuned next Friday when we Review...
Over the Twisting Line of His Spine by The Lady in Grey
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